this is the first draft of my children's tv drama sequence, i have yet to add music and some finishing touches
i used facebook at ask people for feedback as this was a quick way of asking my target audience, i got 3 'likes' on this post which would indicate that people liked it and thought it was a good first draft
this shows feedback I recieved from someone off youtube, they commented that they liked the character names & them all sitting on the sofa but should add a shot of the school and maybe a different font
http://www.jamendo.com/en/artist/Tymphony
this is the site where I got my copy right free music from.
this is the final draft of my children's tv drama sequence
You need to upload the script, storyboard, and shotlist. You could include an analysis of a third opening sequence in your research. On the magazine add some small coverlines or cartoon images to fill some of the empty spaces.
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